User blog comment:LunarEclipsingLight/FREAKING MORE CRINGY PICTURES CAUSE I DONT KNOW WHAT TO POST NYGAAAHHHHHHH/@comment-33620296-20181121124221

So I'm just going to give critique:

1. Do NOT use circle tool, even if you're terrible drawing circles, circle tool just makes a piece look lazy. There ARE exceptions though when using circle tools, such as: Using it as a base for a head/joints when sketching out a pose. Just don't use it in a final piece. (Actually, looking at the picture, even more, I can't really tell if you used circle tool, or used it and edited the lines).

2. The heads are way too disproportionate to the face. I don't know, it just looks really off to me. I suggest making the eyebrows and the mouth a little bigger.

3. Pretty sure Rin does not have plain white skin and light blue scleras.

4. The neck to head comparison is just not good. You should make the head smaller, or make the neck bigger. (Also, extend the shoulders a bit)

That's all I can say, I'm assuming you're still a beginner artist, so don't feel bad about your art. If you practice every day, you can become better at art. Because I believe everyone can become better at it with enough passion and practice.

Have a good day!

-Mysticquation