User blog comment:TTYNoire/I'm throwing more fan art at you!/@comment-46379017-20200805005406/@comment-32467167-20200805014715

Nah, dun lol, it looks great and I do care about it, I just saw it after some time ago again but last time, I forgot to comment (my bad ).

Critiques:


 * Try keeping some of the hair in front of the face.


 * Try keeping elbows curvey instead of pointy


 * Try to outline with really dark brown or black.

But overall, it looks great!