User blog comment:Mokomo1/Betty - Mirror to Amber (by Mokomo)/@comment-33620296-20180216122956/@comment-33620296-20180218041354

Haha, nice to know someone watches Solar Sands as well.

But here goes nothing...

The anatomy is fine, but her left knee looks kinda crooked; I suggest lessening the "fat" in her knee so it can look normal. Her face is a bit off too, her mouth is way too close to her chin and the pink glowing thing is a bit distracting. Maybe you can learn where things on the face are placed so you can prevent yourself from making the same mistake again. (Like searching up tutorials on the drawing a human face.)

The coloring's good, but maybe you can change the way you color the tips of her hair. (I think you said this piece was made in MS Paint, forgive me if I'm wrong.) MS Paint has a lot of limitations but you can try selecting different hues to make her hair less awkward. But as I said, MS Paint has a lot of limitations it will be a bit time consuming if you try doing that.

I'm kinda confused on where the light source is because of the shading, I suggest knowing where the light source is and then shade it on the OPPOSITE direction on where the light source is coming from. (You can watch LavenderTowne's video about shading and lighting to get a more clear idea on shading and lighting.)

Overall, this piece isn't bad, but I believe you can fix somethings to make it better.

(Sorry if there's a typo, my fingers are dying.)